writtenkits's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Link's Prize]

Welcome!

Awesome Job Heather! Welcome to Newgrounds, and I can't wait to see more of your stuff!!!

[GhostFight-BOS-Part1]

Fuck Yeah!

That was tight!!!

[Possibly Clever: Travel]

Not Bad

But there are definitely places for improvement. It wasn't too funny, but it does have it's times. And record louder next time, lol. I had to watch it twice just to hear every bit of what was being said.

PossiblyClever responds:

I would record louder, but I have only a crappy headset at the moment so anything much louder than that will become inaudible and ear-splitting. I'll be buying a new microphone as soon as I have the money.

[The Game]

Ummm...

...it was alright. Not really animation, though was it? Seemed like you just took a real video and put colors onto it, and then added some random pictures. Which takes work, nonetheless, so I give you five stars for that. I'd like to see you do more with the war vs. paintball idea you have going there. And I'd like to see it in more of animation context. I'll look for your next submissions.

23450 responds:

Did i draw every character to make them move? no. But i created every movement, whether it was filmed, drawn , or simply a camera movement. So, for the most part, it would qualify as animation, but as i said in my comments, its not "traditional".

And yes, it did take a deacent amount of work. Good amount of editing and random crap all the way through.

I would have liked to do alot more with war and paintball as well. Never di get around to doing it though.

Check out some of my other stuff if you want "actual" animation. This is the first and hopefuly only video/animation im going to do.

[Anger pt1]

???

[Sarcasm] You got your inspiration for Krinkels...are you serious? I would have never guessed! Seeing how it's pretty much his drawings...with your added accessories. [End Sarcasm] Do us a favor and do something original. You have an imagination right? Let us see it please!

poopkicker24 responds:

dude you make a madness flash see how hard it is prick

[The Room Of Thoughts]

Hmmm

I really didn't mind this too much. The storyline was actually pretty cool and unique.

Criticism: I know you stated that you don't want people giving you a zero for it being a stick figure animation. I didn't. But you did lose points because of it. If you have the imagination and the will to work hard for three days to come up with this, what's to stop you for working semi-hard for thiry days? I'd like to think of this work as a teaser. I really hope that you'll expand not only your storyline, but also your creativity in the times to come! Good work!

[Spaceships]

Lmao

I personally found this hillarious. So random. Yeah, this is going into the favorites.

AdamJack responds:

Cheers man. :)

[Anigen The Bee]

Nuh-uh

David the Gnome was way better.

Negina responds:

NO FUCK YOU

[RE-UNdead shorts]

*Giggle*

Haha. The cake. The cube. The damn song!!! Very nice!

Criticism: The only problem I had was that I would have to alternate between turning the sound up and down. The voices were a little difficult to hear. But beyond that, it was pretty funny!

Khris responds:

ya sorry about that dude, getting a new mike soon

[Underneath]

Yes!

I really enjoyed this! The sounds, the images, the scenarios. All good dude. Thanks!