writtenkits's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Frustration Game]

What can I say?

For the type of game this is, you did a perfect job. I have no qualms! Challenging and interesting! Good job!

[Enrichment Center BETA]

Rushed?

I really enjoyed this, it had a nice feel to it, and that good old point/click nostalgia.

Criticism: It's a bit short, and at times felt rushed. The puzzles weren't all that hard to figure out. I wish that you would have made it a bit longer, and the puzzles would get increasingly more difficult as well.

But all around, good job!

RAWowner333 responds:

yes, it is a tad short. this was made for my flash class so, i didn't want to overwhelm my teacher. after chamber 04 he just couldn't figure it out. kinda weird. though i am thinking of more puzzles and all. hopefully more challenging ones.

[Propaganda Mart]

Hmmm...

Not bad. I actually like that it taught me things that I didn't already know. Kudos.

Criticism: There are a lot of typos in here. It made it a bit hard to take the piece seriously at times. But that's just the way I am. The graphics were horrible, but that didn't take away your effect at all, as you were pretty much using Flash as a medium in which to voice facts.

All around, I enjoyed this, as it was a bit of a surprise finding something so intellectual on NG. (Not that there isn't any, but this was riddled with interesting facts.) Good job, and thanks for getting me thinking!

[Fancy Pants Adventures]

Noice

It's Sonic...with pants!!!!!!

[Jack French #3]

Wow...

...I'm a bit speechless...Vundebaugh! Good Work! Bravo! Etc. This was a great series, especially for a point and click lover like myself! Great work!

[Jack French #2]

Yay!

Edwyn Tiong's voice sounds extremely familiar. What other games/movies has he taken place in? And, I was not disappointed what so ever! This was even better than the first! I love these games!

[Jack French #1]

Suite

That was the bees knees my friend! I'm going to play the other ones right now!

Johnnybdesign responds:

oh! Thanks for the good words.

[Agent Scarecrow #1]

Something's missing...

The game was missing some...depth, player wise. Aside from the apartment, I didn't get to choose my adventure at all! lol But, your graphics were amazing, the music was enthralling, and I really enjoyed the storyline! I look forward to playing 2.

Johnnybdesign responds:

Thanks for the comments. I hope that #2 and #3 will be flawless :)

[Boot Stick Shark]

Move faster!!!!!!!!!!

Cute idea...pretty good graphics...his movement pisses me off, though. Honestly, I understand your concept, but it was annoying to watch a shark move so slowly with a boot. My opinion.

Teeter-Bird responds:

The shark now moves faster, I hope you'll give the game another try and see how you like it!

[Trixie platform game!]

Alright

The scenery was pretty good with the stars and all, but it could have used music and maybe a point? Pretty cool that you made a whole game for someone, though. Kudos for that. Question: Are you supposed to die at the end? I couldn't find a way to jump that huge gap.